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写给14班和17班,还有15级的5班和6班

 
 
 

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感谢信 优秀作文展示 建议家长也可以看一看,不懂的就叫你的孩儿给你翻译一下  

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14班        杜宇恒
Dear Mr Yu  
  I always believe that you are a good math teacher and a good guide. You've given me too much help in the past three years. I just want to say "thank you very much".
 Three years ago, I got into our class, the best class in our school. When I saw you at first, I thought you were a cool guy. I am not good at math, but you never give up anyone and try to help them.Maybe sometimes you are not friendly to us even beat us. I know that you try to make us become better and better, so I never hate you. When we have progress, you give us your beautiful smile.
 As time goes by, I am not a little boy any more and you become older every day. Although I am still not good at studying, I just want to say "Thank you".
                                                                          Your's    Du

我看到这篇文章之后很感动,觉得他能够这样理解余老师很难得,因为不是很多人都能够理解。我将这篇文章翻译给余老师听了,他没有立即说话,显然他是感动了。当一个平常可以高声吼叫的人突然沉默,那一定是有什么东西触动了他的内心。阿杜,你的这一番话,不管是不是发自内心,我想会更让余老师死心塌地地对你们好,真心地为你们好。


哈哈,当然,居然也在作文当中发现了一篇写我的文章,那我就拿过来显摆显摆哈,让我也享受一下被学生表扬的滋味。


14班          刘润之
   Now I am a student in Class 14, Grade 9. I have made great progress in English. So I thank my English teacher who is named Sophia.
   She is a friendly teacher and we all like her very much. She says that I can speak English really well but my English result isn't really very good even poor. She also likes everyone in our class. Everyone is her child. She is not only a good friend but also a good teacher. She can teach English very well. With her help, I think English is more interesting and easier. Maybe I can do it better in the future. This time, I think I fail to pass the exam because it is really a little difficult for me and maybe it's not only for me. I really don't want to let her down in the slightest. So I must work harder than before.
  I am sure I will do better if I work harder. I will pay more attention to English than other subjects, because I like Sophia. She is really a good teacher and she is a successful teacher.
这篇文章跟上一篇不同,不是以书信的方式呈现,但是跟上一篇一样,都非常有针对性,符合我们所倡导的“可写可不写的坚决不写,非写不可的黑起写”的要求,有针对性,也有感染力,这样的写作角度很好,而且从我们的角度来说,情真意切(不好意思,我是把你们的这些话都当作心里话来对待的哈), 所以如果不是有些语法方面的错误,或者书写的原因的话,这两篇文章都将是非常高的作文。但是,抛开技术层面的东西,文章流露出来的真情实感实属高分。


接下来推荐几篇也写得好的作文:
17班     张桉源
  At present,I am in Grade 9. Many people give me a hand in my study. There are so many people I should say thanks to.
  First of all, I should say thanks to my teachers. They are very patient with me. They always help me swim in the ocean of knowledge. They are the most important. I'd like to say thanks to my parents sincerely too. They always encourage me to study hard. Whenever I get into trouble, they are sure to help me and cheer me up. And they always take pride in everything good I do. It's amazing how much they have given me! At last, I want to say thanks to my classmates. I believe I can't study well without their help. We get along well with each other and help each other.
 So you see, there are really a lot of people I should say thanks to.


14班      李星颖
 In my life, there are many people who have helped me, such as parents, teachers and friends. Time goes by, and I start to understand how important they are. Although I am not able to do something useful for them now, I can say thanks to them, my parents.
 Thank you, my parents! Thank you for coming into my life. Now I am a middle school student and I will go to high school soon. During the last term, I am sorry to make you annoyed sometimes. Luckily, you still care about me all the time. When I was tired, you always cooked something I like and told me to have a rest. You gave me a lot of confidence after failing the test. If I meet difficulties, you will be patient to help me. Whether you are busy or not, you try to teach me something I don't know in study.
  Please believe me. I will try my best to become the person who you want me to be. 
李星颖是个乖乖女呢!

14班      胡雅馨
  In the past two years, I've been helped by some people. My life has changed a lot because of them.
  Since I was born, my parents have always been the ones caring for me. When I went to middle school, they decided to spend more time with me. They often said to me that they loved me more than themselves. I always hid my love from them, but it was true that I tried my best to make them happy. In my school life, my friends and teachers are also important to me. It was because of their help that I made progress.
  Our life is full of love, and the love should be kept well. 
中间写父母的地方可以更多一点,这样会更充实。

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