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写给14班和17班,还有15级的5班和6班

 
 
 

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14  任俊彦: 写的是极度不熟悉的人物

 

Oceanside, Lainey Lou

  Now more and more teenagers prefer energetic songs to gentle music. I still want to introduce the song called Oceanside, though.

 Oceanside is written by Lainey Lou. She is less popular and maybe you have never heard of(听说) her name before. However, she is known as a great singer and even a musician in her small circle of fans. Oceanside is her best-known song. As the name suggests, the song is very gentle, beautiful, quiet and always makes us feel comfortable, just like her voice. When you are sad or angry, listening to this song always helps.

  For me, it was because of this song that I have known such a great singer. I like Oceanside very much and I hope more people can listen to the song and then know this excellent girl.

 

 

 

14  包蕊   写的是很多人都听过,但未必非常熟悉的人物

                                           The strange lady

  There is a person who always wears strange clothes called Lady Gaga. She is one of the best-known singers in the world, although weve seen different kinds of musician come and go. Some think her songs are pretty energetic and others cant stand them. As for me, her songs can give the person who loses heart much power. I like her because of her confidence. She never gives up her own idea even if many people dont like this. She knows what she wants and tries her best to get it.

  Whatever you do, take pride in yourself like Lady Gaga.

 

 

17班 张桉源   写的是自己的老师,熟悉的不能再熟悉的人物

                        The best teacher

  Two months ago, I met Sophia. She teaches me English. She is the best teacher I have ever seen.

 She is very friendly to everyone in our class. She is never angry with someone who makes mistakes. The smile is still on her face even though the students in our class did badly in one exam. She always tells us to take good care of ourselves. It's clear that she loves everyone in our class. She regards us as her own children. And it's certain that she teaches English really well. She pays more attention to our pronunciation and writing. To do this, she always lets us read in a loud voice. What's more, she takes pride in everything good we do. So most of us are very impressed.

  So you see, I only want to say to Sophia, "Thank you!"

 

             

             

 

 

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