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月考高分作文赏析——一件难忘的事 妈妈们不要忘了来看看12们平时不太对你说的话哈  

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14分作文赏析
14班     李杰
                             An Unforgettable Thing
  As time goes by, everyone will grow up. However, our mother is always behind us. Whatever happens, her arms will still be warm. We can't grow up without problems. It's part of the life.
  When I was 8, I failed in my final exam. I was very sad. I couldn't come up with any answers to why I couldn't get better grades. I cried. My mother told me that it didn't mean anything. We had many exams, and the most important one was the next. She would always believe in me. Then I tried my best to study hard. So I have already got many good grades. But I do remember what my mother said. The next one is the most important. My mother helped me get out of the trouble, and believe in myself again.
  Thank you mom. Thank you for being right here.

14班      胡雅馨
            An Unforgettable Thing
  Whenever I meet problems, my mom is always with me, and tries her best to help me. As time goes by, she has given me lots of unforgettable experiences.
  One thing that I still remember happened in a cold winter. I was badly ill, and my mom  had to stay with me every day. She took care of me carefully and never told me that how tired she was. One day, she gave me an big apple to eat, but I still felt sick and didn't want to eat anything. So she went out to buy some other apples that were much smaller and tried to make me eat ones. In this way, I realized how much she loved me.
  Mom, I just want to tell you that I will love you just like how you love me.


14班    吕梦莹
                      An Unforgettable Thing
  When I was seven years old, my mother had to go to another city for a long time because of her work. I was pretty sad. I couldn't imagine how long the time was! I gave her a picture which I drew before she left. Some days ago, I was surprised to see the picture on my mother's bag. And from this I see the real love between us and feel really warm.
 The unforgettable thing makes it possible for me to tell my mother some words from my heart. I can talk with her easily now. It's  important for my life.
  There is some gratitude and love that I want to tell you. My dear mom: I come to the world because of you. My life has changed a lot because of you. I have grown and become better and better because of you. And my life is full of happiness and love also because of you. Thank you very much and I will love you forever!


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17班      周倩竹
       An Unforgettable Thing
  Whatever happens, there's always someone being there for me. Of course, it's my mom. And she did one thing that I can't forget in my whole life.
 I was naughty enough when I was young. Everyone in class didn't really like me and even the teacher said I wasn't supposed to be here. One day I had a fight with my classmate so that I was asked to go back home. Mom came and then she took me home. The strange thing was that she didn't say a word and acted like nothing happened. But while I was going to bed, mom said in a low voice,"Look, life is full of happiness. Try to be kind to everyone. Remember whatever happens, your parents are always here for you."
  Mom's words really moved me. And I've changed a lot. Anyway, I just want to say three words to mom, "I love you".



 
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