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写给14班和17班,还有15级的5班和6班

 
 
 

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14班佳作欣赏  

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作文主要看思想和内容,其次再看语法,我认为下面的同学写的关于一中的作文内容充实,语言流畅,语言运用能力强,所犯语法错误少,各位童靴可以借鉴,学习。当然也欢迎各位来找错,找老师改作文时没有发现的错误。

Sample 1   14    

from Class 14      Ren Junyan 任俊彦

 Come to No. 1 Middle School and Change Your life

  No. 1 Middle School is one of the best schools. Studying in this school is really a good chance and experience for me. I have been in No. 1 Middle School for two years now.

  When I was a student in Grade Six, all I ever wanted to do was to get good grades in every subject. That sounds impossible, but I can, just because of the teachers in No. 1 Middle School. Every teacher in this school is excellent enough to help you study better and better.

  Besides that, No. 1 Middle School is very beautiful and clean. Also, it’s very quiet. This means that it’s really a perfect place to study.

  It’s because I study in No. 1 Middle School that I become a very good student. Thank you, No. 1 Middle School. I hope more children come here and become better and better.

 

Sample 2:   13

From Class 14 Luo Hanze  罗涵泽

 Come to No. 1 Middle School and change your life

 To try to get a good job in the future, you have to study well. How to get good grades? First of all, you must choose a great school!

  As we know, No. 1 Middle School is one of the best schools. So I made a decision to choose this school. I have made many friends with my classmates. They are all friendly to me. And the teachers there are very kind and great.

  You can imagine how nice the environment is! When I see those beautiful flowers and trees, I feel happy and relaxed. The most important thing of this school is that the students are smart and great. It’s because the teachers in No. 1 Middle School do very well in teaching. This is the reason why I like this school.

  Thanks, No. 1 Middle School! Thank you for giving me a lot.

 

 

Sample 3   14

From Class 14  Hu Yaxin 胡雅馨

 

Come to No. 1 Middle School and change your life

  Did you ever think about how to grow up?  Did you ever find the way to change your life? In my opinion, studying is the best way for us to make the change.

 When I was a little kid, all I ever wanted to do was to grow up. I dreamt that I could fly in the sky all the time. But I just found learning was the only way to change my life. So I went to No. 1 Middle School to study. Though I couldn’t have fun like a little kid, I was willing to enjoy studying. Now, I have been in the school for two years. The school helps me to make progress in many things I am doing. I think life in No. 1 Middle School will be the best three years.

  Fortunately, we have a good school like No. 1 Middle School. Thank you, No. 1 Middle School!

 

Sample 4  13

From Class 14   Ji Yuanyuan 纪圆媛

  When I was a young girl, I have already heard a lot about No. 1 Middle School which is one of the best middle schools in Chongqing. I believe you can imagine how excited I was when I knew that I could be a middle school student in No. 1 Middle School.

 Then, two years passed, the school also changed me a lot. The school is crowded with talented students and creative teachers. You can make progress in a short time by studying hard, just because the teachers and classmates can try their best to help you. And you can have many different experiences to make yourself become a better student. If you join the school, it must be easier to make your dream come true.

  Don’t wait anymore. Just come and join us!

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