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大周考17班优秀作文欣赏  

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这次作文总体同学们都有进步,对好句好词的运用有所提高,但是在很多同学也许因为这次的作文简单,反而忽略了审题的细节。

审题很重要,除了列举出来的小的要点,很多同学没有注意到作文已经给出的第一句话: I want to talk about why I want to improve my English and how I can do it. 很多同学第一个大要点写的很好,但可惜第二部分基本都写成了给别人提建议了,所以加上自己犯的一些语法错误,分数就不高了。在下列的这些作文中,前几篇扣题很好,值得借鉴。其余同学虽然前半部分都写得好,但是在审题上有些问题,写着写着就写成别人了,写成给别人提建议了,而且语法上也有错误,但在我发出来的文章上,有些地方我已经做了处理,各位请取他们优秀的地方来借鉴,也可以看一下他们的文章怎样修改会更好。

周倩竹   14

Ladies and gentlemen,

   Today I want to talk about why I want to improve my English and how I can do it. I have been studying English for 6 years now. and I really enjoy it. One of the reasons for studying English is that I want to travel all over the world. English can be very useful around the world. And I like English movies. Studying English can help me with this. The most important reason is I want to find a great job. It’s because I really want to improve my English that I find some good ways. Reading English books, listening to English news and songs, practicing speaking English can give good help.

  I hope my English can be better and better.

游皓    11

 Ladies and gentlemen,

 Today I want to talk about why I want to improve my English and how I can do it. First of all, I want to talk about some reasons for learning English. First, I want to travel around the world and watch some English movies. Then, I want to find a good job in 6 years. 

  Next, I want to talk about some ways to improve English. I think we should read some English books and practice speaking English. Then we could watch English newspapers and listen to English songs.

 In fact, I love English very much. Nothing’s gonna change my love for English. Thank you.

秦雪莲 12

  Ladies and gentlemen,

  Today I want to talk about why I want to improve my English and how I can do it. When I was a very young girl, my dream was to travel all over the world and find a good job to make a lot of money. I like watching English movies , but I don’t know what they say. Because of them, I should improve my English.

 The first is reading English books. It can make you know more new words.  Listening to English news and English songs is also a good idea to learn English. Having some conversations with foreigners is very important.

  This is all about how I improve my English. Thanks for listening.

彭睿婕  12

Ladies and gentlemen,

 Today I want to talk about why I want to improve my English and how I can do it. I have been studying English since 6 years ago. I want to travel all over the world. So I must improve my English. I like seeing some movies about English. And I want to get a good job. So I must study English very hard. I will read some books about English. There are two interesting ways to study English. One of them is listening to some news about English. The other way is listening to a lot of English songs. But speaking English often is more important. I will do it.

史森鑫   12

 Ladies and gentlemen,

  Today I want to talk about why I want to improve my English and how I can do it. I want to learn English because I want to travel all over the world, see many English movies and find a good job. These are my dreams. But how can I improve my English? I think I should read English books. Then I should listen to English songs and English news. Finally, I should speak English as much as possible. I believe when I finish these tasks, my dream will come true.

  I hope when my dream come true, I will be very happy.

陈一鸣  12

 Ladies and gentlemen,

 Today I want to talk about why I want to improve my English and how I can do it. When I was a little girl, all I ever wanted to do was to travel all over the world. I also liked English movies, and I thought it was really fun to watch them. I wanted to find a good job to change your life, tooso I wanted to improve my English. There are many ways to improve English. First, you should read English books every day. You can also listen to the English news and songs. At last, you may practice your English!

  I hope that one day you will study English well!

杨媛翔  12

  Ladies and gentlemen,

  Today I want to talk about why I want to improve my English and how I can do it. It is because I want to travel all over the world that I spend some time studying English. I like watching English movies very much and I want to have a great job. So I want to speak English well.

  Now I have some ways to improve my English. First of all, I find reading English books is useful. Then listening to English news and songs is also a good idea. Finally, remember to make progress in your conversation.

 If you want to improve your English, you will find some useful ways.

何家庆    12

 Ladies and gentlemen,

 Today I want to talk about why I want to improve my English and how I can do it. First of all, I should try my best to study English. That’s very important. I have been studying English for 8 years. I never dislike it, because I have a dream. I want to travel around the world, and I like English movies. Also, I want to find a good job in the future. I know some ways to improve English. For example, I should usually read English books. I think it’s a good idea to listen to English news or English songs. It’s important to practice speaking English.

 If you study English very well, then you will be happy.

程宇昊  12

 Ladies and gentlemen,

  Today I want to talk about why I want to improve my English and how I can do it. I have been studying English for 6 years. The most important reason for learning English is I want to travel all over the world. Other reasons are I want to see English movies and find a good job. These are all I ever wanted to do. But English isn’t easy enough to improve. So I find some ways. When I have much free time , I often read some English books or listen to the English songs. And don’t forget to practice speaking English.

 If you do these well, you will make great progress in English.

吴奕宏  10

 Ladies and gentlemen,

  Today I want to talk about why I want to improve my English and how I can do it. English is important and useful for everyone. We can speak English everywhere in the world. If we can speak English very well, we can travel around the world, watch English movies easily, and even get a great job. But studying English is hard. I will tell you some ways to help you improve your English. First of all, we should read our English book well. Then we can listen to some English music or English news. After that we should speak English with some people who live in some English-speaking countries.

  Remember if you believe me, you will be successful.

谢长怡  

  Ladies and gentlemen,

  Today I want to talk about why I want to improve my English and how I can do it. There are some reasons for learning English. First, we can travel around the world and see some famous buildings in some English-speaking countries. Next, I think it’s interesting for us to see lots of English movies, such as the Iron Man. The most important reason is to get a good job. English can help you become better. There are some ways to improve English. The most interesting ways are to read English books and listen to English songs. It’s also important to practice speaking English.

  English is important in our life. Well, that’s about all the things I have for now.

 

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